Date: 2012-06-28 03:57 pm (UTC)
This is a wonderful beginning. You really do a great job of relating how Rose feels cut adrift in her new universe. How she feels she was abandoned both emotionally, and physically, by the Doctor. I could see where Rose would have felt the Doctor tried to distance himself from her when he regenerated, especially after Reinette. They really needed to have a very long discussion after that incident. I hate to see Rose suffering so much.

I loved your imagery here. The Bad Wolf was capable of anything and everything:
In her dreams she dreamed of travelling through the vast sea of stars at breakneck speed with eons of time passing by her eyes in a shimmering and pulsing smear. Her body surged and flared with a ferocious power that threatened to rip the space time continuum in half, and it was glorious and intoxicating having that much authority. She was creation and destruction, she was life and death, she was clarity and madness, she was freedom and bondage all wrapped up in a human shell. She had all the power in the universe, she was the master of her own domain and if she wanted to, could bring the apocalypse to anyone who would dare cross her.

The sonic screwdriver!? I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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