This part was even better than the last. I love the world you have woven here. The demon who lives to give pleasure, yet leaves no memory imprint on his host. I wonder if Maria will consciously become satisfied. How long will she desire her demon? How does he interact within the rest of her reality? Does he only exist for her, or can he be seen by others?
So many questions! That is a mark of a good story, when the reader is left wanting more. I think you have excelled with this story. It is one of your best!
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Date: 2012-04-07 05:32 pm (UTC)So many questions! That is a mark of a good story, when the reader is left wanting more. I think you have excelled with this story. It is one of your best!