I really liked the way you set the scene right from the beginning: Dusk is an odd time, isn’t it? The birth of night, where city lamps ignite one by one, where every object takes on a blueish tone. Where the puddles in the city streets reflect the lights off of passing cars and busses. And at such an odd time, and on such an unassuming day, anything can happen.
I can't imagine how difficult it would have been for the Doctor to see Rose in a relationship with another version of himself. As long as she was happy though, I am sure he would not interfere. I like your 'meet cute' scene. The Doctor would never pressure her to choose.
Your love scene between the Doctor and Rose was pretty hot. I liked this part the best: Last night was a blur, between the time they fallen on his couch to the time where they had practically ripped their clothes to shreds off their bodies, was a glorious and colour smear on canvas…
I chuckled a bit at the image of the Doctor making Rose pancakes. I am sure domestics with Rose would be more like a dream come true for this weary, lonely Time Lord.
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Date: 2012-03-31 06:39 pm (UTC)Dusk is an odd time, isn’t it? The birth of night, where city lamps ignite one by one, where every object takes on a blueish tone. Where the puddles in the city streets reflect the lights off of passing cars and busses. And at such an odd time, and on such an unassuming day, anything can happen.
I can't imagine how difficult it would have been for the Doctor to see Rose in a relationship with another version of himself. As long as she was happy though, I am sure he would not interfere. I like your 'meet cute' scene. The Doctor would never pressure her to choose.
Your love scene between the Doctor and Rose was pretty hot. I liked this part the best:
Last night was a blur, between the time they fallen on his couch to the time where they had practically ripped their clothes to shreds off their bodies, was a glorious and colour smear on canvas…
I chuckled a bit at the image of the Doctor making Rose pancakes. I am sure domestics with Rose would be more like a dream come true for this weary, lonely Time Lord.